Good Morning, Dear Tornapart!
Wishing you and yours well and a wonderful weekend. I always appreciate your vote-of-confidence posts!
Love,
CoCo
this tired, lonely man has been snared, but i protest little .
she holds me tenderly in her tightening but welcome thrall.
i cave willingly -- oh, so willingly -- to her amatory attentions.
Good Morning, Dear Tornapart!
Wishing you and yours well and a wonderful weekend. I always appreciate your vote-of-confidence posts!
Love,
CoCo
this tired, lonely man has been snared, but i protest little .
she holds me tenderly in her tightening but welcome thrall.
i cave willingly -- oh, so willingly -- to her amatory attentions.
This tired, lonely man has been snared, but I protest little . . .
She holds me tenderly in her tightening but welcome thrall. I cave willingly -- oh, so willingly -- to her amatory attentions. Supernal love revives what what had been declared dead and reawakens a worn man's youthful cravings, long ago gone dormant.
I was fashioned diminutive in body, slow of mind, by Nature's impartial, cold hand. Yet, my heart is big. Fallen, I rise slowly but deliberately toward the reviving affection offered by the queen of love. She reigns over a devoted corps of men who accede willingly to her demands. Allegiance to their newfound mistress has not been without cost to them who relinquish safe but unfulfilling earthbound devotion.
No more will love's pitiable but sincere offerings go unrequited.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adjijphj8co.
Thank you, Hortensia!
Love Anne Murray. I remember hearing her regularly -- on the radio (remember the radio?).
CC
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adjijphj8co.
Thanks, Smiddy, fulltime, cofty, torn and brain, for commenting!
Both groups, Only Boys Aloud and Only Men Aloud, are from Wales.
Impressive!
CC
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adjijphj8co.
Join, erbie, JOIN!
I regularly attend our magnificent local concert choir programs. And where do they perform? What buildings tend to have the best acoustics?!?!?! You got it!
Thanks for posting!
CoCo Chanteur
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adjijphj8co.
Thanks, erbie! Spot on.
Rip: Google Only Men Aloud/then song title.
CC
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adjijphj8co.
It has passion, a quality lacking in many Kingdom Melodies.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=adjijphj8co.
using that, which and who to introduce clauses and when to use commas:.
the little boy who lives next door is a noisy, hell-raising brat.
"who lives next store" describes one little boy in particular, not the entire neighborhood of nice and respectful children; therefore, that clause is not set off by commas.
I'm not for stilted either, Hortensia. A bunch of my old stuff is, but I did it on purpose.
BTW: there are obvious differences between dialogue and narrative. To employ convincing regional speech patterns and word usage are challenging. So easy to bomb if the writer has no feel for or sense of the local jargon. Narrators, on the other hand, can be omniscient or unreliable. What a position to occupy!
The writer must be both clever and capable . . .
CC
using that, which and who to introduce clauses and when to use commas:.
the little boy who lives next door is a noisy, hell-raising brat.
"who lives next store" describes one little boy in particular, not the entire neighborhood of nice and respectful children; therefore, that clause is not set off by commas.
I, too, am seated, Oubliette!
The more I learn, the less I know!
Thanks so much for contributing!
Overuse of screamers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CC!